Writing Sample: A sample chapter
I have not kept it a secret, nor have I broadcast into the world my ongoing attempt to write a novel. I have actually had 4-5 ideas for stories/books/novels and I am still sitting on them. The one which seemed most persistent in my thoughts has been the one I am going on my 20th month of working on. I have read a few books on writing and from time to time I have hit walls. The outline covers beginning to end, but at times I am still struggling with the parts in between. I simply thought I would share a chapter and see what the feedback was. This particular chapter provides a more detailed introduction to one of my main characters in the story. This book is Science Fiction. The events here take place on another planet called Vasparia. A world similar to Earth, a bit more technologically developed. Also, I would be tempted to say be kind, but in all honesty, I want real feedback. I am happy with this. I am sure in the rewrites it will change, but for a first draft, I felt